Good stuff, super clean and fluid.
Good stuff, super clean and fluid.
pog
Love tha jokes and art, perfect.
Great episode! The animation improved a TON and I feel as though the voice acting in all my co-stars has improved greatly over the year-long gap between this and the previous episode. Also, I forgot to say this to you, but I think the pen being pressure sensitive REALLY makes the animation look better, but maybe that's just me.
the pen pressure tool, I know, right? :D
really should had used that a long time ago, make the outlines seem thiner and I dunno...lighter, more appeasing to the eye =]
Thanks man, you were awesome as well in this!
About damn time you can work on something other than Sanity, can't wait to see more shit man, awesome work.
Very well put together, I enjoy the art style and thought the voice acting was decent overall.
Only problem I had was that I didn't think it was too funny, but I'd imagine you were working within the rules of your University project so it's excusable. X]
ARE YOU HAPPY NOW?
:3
I like your art style and the audio quality was pretty decent, but I feel that you probably could have came up with a better joke.
I hope you do improve though, you have potential. :]
Better than Batman Dance...
But not by much, the art still needs work, as does the writing.
But I did think the animation was fairly smooth.
Hmmm...
The animation was okay, but not very good, but I'm sure you will improve over time. The joke was old to me and the way you portrayed is was very poor. I usually write more detailed reviews, but this flash felt soulless, but I know you will improve in the future!
(Work on writing and animation is what you should gather from my review.)
Age 30, any/all
Poland
Joined on 7/19/10